My world shattered.
Dreams crushed.
Left alone forever
Untouched.
' I love you' you tell me
That's what you say.
But when your hands hit me
I don't feel this way.
' Don't tell anyone' is what you say
All I can do is bow my head in shame and
turn the other way.
I'm better with you gone.
I have never felt so strong.
I did the right thing even though
my heart is still
torn.
damn i thought you and ramon were a loving couple. jk
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem because it has rhyming in it, and i like rhyming poems. Also i liked that you wrote about your Feelings/Love because most people are afraid to write about how they feel, and about their life except for William Shakespeare.
ReplyDeleteI also thought you put alot of thoughts and effort into your work.